corey spanos response

+ Extra special animation with fab potential to be something extra extra special. Attempt and consider to add more shading, to add depth and character, also an improvement to be made, is to have more blend between the movement of scene to scene.

I believe the main character in which you have created has a Jedward style, and the hair size should definitely take a decrease to add more reality and involve the audience much more.

william G reponse

+ Good use of mtion tweening in some areas
- Consider adding shading for depth and more of a 3d effect
- Condense the length of your intro, it currently takes up 1/3 of the animation, which is pretty long

nick prynn response

nick prynn, i think that the animtion was good but needs to be improved on sound and needs to be finished but overall i thought it was a good animation.......

Firstly I drew my walk cycle in pencil then scanned it into flash. Then I use it as a template to draw my walk cycle on the Apple Mac. I then added colour to the walk cycle. Lastly I recorded my own footsteps and put then into the animation to make it more realistic.

From this I have learnt how to make an animation in flash and how to edit it. I now know how to use tools in flash as well.

This is useful because when I do other units on animation I will know exactly what to do and also it will help me in the future doing this animation unit because I would like to be an animator. 

The walk cycle was successful in most ways such as the coloring of the animation and the sound but the smoothness of the walk could be improved. I could improve the smoothness of the walk by adding some more frames so it’s not so jerky.

Overall I think my walk cycle was good for my first one even though there is room for improvement.

walk cycle